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PART 20

 

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PART 20 

 

Maan- hy lets go to Amritsar. We’ll visit golden temple

Kritika- han han aapto vhi jaoge, vo jo hai vha

Geet, sweety rohan were bewildered like kon  “vooo”

Maan- aree nhi mn toh bs ainvii keh rha tha. Its all upto u guys

Rohan- vaise vo hot hai n winked

Kritika- aree Amritsar mei maan k relatives rehte hai n their neighbor really like maan. She is head over heels on him

Sweety- ooohhh!!!!

Geet didn’t say anythg.

Kriya- guys we shd go to manali na. mountains. Super fun. Vt say

 

All thought for sometime n dn it was decided tht they will be going to manali though geet don’t want to go thre

Maan came to geet side n teased her a lot like she is scared of going to mountains n geet frowned by his continuous teasing.

She stomped her foot n went from thre

All laughed by geet’s departure.

Sweety- vt maan,  why u alwz tease her. Dekho gussa ho gae vo

Maan- are yr its fun. Aur naarz hona uska roz ka kaam hai.

Chill I’ll be back

 

Maan followed geet to manofy her

Geet went to garden n sat on the bench in middle.

Geet murmured- huhh samjhta kya hai vo apne aap ko. Huhh

She took out earphone from her bag n plugged it to her mob n played song.

Maan came thre n heard her whisper. He was abt to tap her on shoulder when he heard his name n stopped in mid to listen vt she is saying.

Geet- mn koi nhi darti mountain se, huh, jaugi ab mai manali fr us maan ko btaugi. Grhh!!!

Maan(st) sara din bs meri burai krti rehti hai

Geet- are geet bt u knw na mountains r too high, she made a cute pout

Maan chuckle to it (st) aa gae line pe.

Geet- koi na, sweety prem sb honge vha, chill. Hmm

She hummed the song playing on her phone.

 

Galliyaan galliyan teri galliyan.. mujko bhave hai galliyan teri galliyan

 

Maan jumped from back to the bench which make geet startled

 

Maan took one side of ear phone n put to his ear,

Maan- are let me too hear which song u listening.

Geet- uff maan, is this way to come

Maan- so vt??? I toh do like this

Maan- waoo geet u too listening this song. Gud choice

Chlo kisi cheez mei we r same.

Geet gave whatever look to maan n dn snatched her ear phones from him ..

Geet- why u came here?

Maan- geet is this bench have copyright of ur name???

Geet nodded to no not understanding his question

Maan- toh mai jha mrzi baithu, tumhe kya

Geet got angry n stood up,

Maan hold her hand from back n made her stop in her track .

Maan- achha chl sorry. Vo teri sweety keh rhi thi tu naraz ho gae so I came

Geet-its okk

Geet was abt to go when maan pulled her backward n geet fell in maan’s arms. She got angry n shot her big eyes to maan

She struggled to let her free

Maan- chill darpok.sit na. why u alwz kept running??

Geet- she straighten herself n then her hairs.- thre’s nthg like tht

Maan- so all set to go??

Geet- hmmm..

Maan- aree yr, mza ayega believe me.

She nodded

Maan- chl lets sumbit the forms.

All headed to canteen together

Kritika came close to rosy n whispers- I told u thye look perfect .

N winked back to her

Kriya fumed seeing them together

Cant she leave maan alone. She thought .

 

Maan- lets get the forms fill guys

All strted filling it

Kritika- vaise maan bhai if u want toh we can go to Amritsar?

She said in teasing tone

Prem- han aur apni us se bhi mil lena

Maan- shut up guys.

Geet was curious to knw abt tht girl. She shrugged the thought behind’

 

All submit the forms n dn departed to their homes.

 

Geet informed at home abt trip,,

Brij was not agreeing to it bt dn saying it is compulsory they agreed.

Later on video chat

Sweety, rosy n kritika made plans to go for shopping bunking some lectures.

Geet heard it  n like It was one of the moon day night. She too agreed,

Sweety said she shd get sm dresses for trip.

All were super excited abt  it.

Next day

Geet n sweety informed to their mother abt their shopping as they wuld need the money so need to tell banker. Lolz

 

They attend 3 lectures n then came out of clg campus. Car was waiting for them. Geeet glared sweety realizing tht boys too are going to come

Sweety- are yr hume hi new things nhi chahiye, thy too want it yr

Grls came n sat to backseat, maan n prem were in front seat.

Rohan came there, he saw sweety goig out so he followed. When they were abt to go rohan came in front

He asked gesturing through his brows.

Maan took a sharp turn n showed him tongue n zoomed out from there

Sweety gave a hi5 to maan n prem with this.

Then geet’s phone rang

“aree we r going for shopping to XYZ mall. Ya yaa u too come.” she hung the phone after telling rohan abt it.

Sweety- ab vo chipku bhi ayega

Geet- akeli  tujhe new things nhi chahiye, he too want. She said copying her tone like she said a few mins before.

Kriya didn’t come to clg, she alone went for shop

 

(STINNA- chloo haddi khud raste se hat gae. Lolz)

 

They reached  mall n roamed in many shops

Geet was looking for sm dresses n maan was in men’s section.

Geet took dresses n went to changing room.

All were in same shop. Maan went to biys’s changing room

Both changing room’s r separated with only a wall.

Geet changed to a pink salwar suit, she liked it.

Dn she wore red tank tops with black capris suggested by sweety

dress fitted her cur-vicious body perfectly, she is looking breath taking in it. 

(assume the black top as red)

 

 

Geet- hmm achhi lag rhi hai.

Maan heard her voice n thought to tease her

Maan in different tone- hy gorgeous.

Geet heard n got lil scared. She saw here n there n found no1.

Geet- maybe sm1 outside

Maan- lukng sexxyy in red (maan peeped a lil by standing on bench to his side)

Her eyes got bigger with cmnt.

 

She asked whose it??? She called  sweety bt she went to check more dresses. 

 

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PART 19

Helloo.. here m with updte after a year. lolzzz. really sorry haan. 

me too hav to re think n plot evrythg again as i forgot vt i thought before. so here is updte, hope u like it.

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PART 19

 

 

MADE NEW BANNER. HOPE ITS OKBig smile

 

 

The bell rang n they all hav to go to attend lectures..

Geet- ok we ll discuss it later.. lets goo now.

 

All headed towards the lectures.

 

In lecture room.. the lecturer was giving lectures.

 

Maan was not interested in it.. so was playing with the pen by putting it in his mouth

Rohan was making the cartoons sketch,

Geet n pari were listening the lectures.

The sitting arrangement was like. Addressed all with their name’s 1stletter

Geet- G, maan- M, pari- P, prem- Pr , sweety-S , rohan- R, kritika-K, karan- kr , kriya- H(as haddi.. lolzzz)

 

                 G# P#      S# R#

                 M# Pr#     K# Kr#

                   #  #        H#  #

 

(HOPE U GET THE SITTING ARRANGEMENT. IF NOT THEN PM ME N CAN ASK )

 

Rohan nudged sweety n asked when to go 4 movie?

Sweety replied tht she don’t knw.. let ask all.. rohan said tht hw this can be happen??? When tht sadduu is giving lecture

Sweety- no fear whn grt sweety is here.. rohan laughed at his comment

Lecturer- silence sdts.. give attention.

(sweety n rohan were sitting close, so they were talking)

Sweety wrote on a paper n crushed it n then saw the saddu n cleverly  throw it to maan.

Maan got it n saw sweety who grinned her teeth. Dn maan opened it.

 ” vt abt movie?? Make ur sherni agree or else???”

Maan wrote smthg In it n throw it towards sweety.. sweety got it n saw

“yupp we ll go, bt hw to make tht ziddi grl agree??”

She turned n saw maan n she made a puppy face.

Maan took a piece of paper n wrote smthg in it n throw it to geet’s bench.. geet saw here n there n dn back. To which maan jst showed his teeth

Dn signaled her to opn it..

Geet opn it

“moti if u don’t go na dn I’ll alwz call u moti”

Geet loudly said- houuu with O Shape mouth

Saddu(lecturer) turned n saw geet with open mouth- vt happen??? Do u hav any doubt???

Geet stammering- g sir.. g.. nhi kuch nhi.

Saddu nodded n strted writing smthg on board

Geet then turned n shot an angry glare to maan like she will eat him

Pari asked geet vts in paper. Geet cant show him or else she will also call her moti. Lolzz tht she don’t want

Geet dn wrote smthg on it n throw towards maan.

“dare u call me with tht name. or else I’ll tell ur secret to all”

Maan got confused like vt secret she knws of him.. he don’t hav smthg to hide.

He wrote n throw to geet

“oyee konsa???”

Geet then thrw back

“u forgot??? Abt morning call. Hmmm I guess ur alarm.”

Maan when read this his eyes popped out.. he thought- if any1 cmes to knw abt his fevicol dn vt all will say????? No he ant afford this.

 

All the while maaneet were talking one person was fuming n was crushing her notebook by her own

Kriya didn’t liked this. Her eyes were on them only.

Maan was hell confused to how to make her agree. As she is super ziddi.

Lecturer-  so stdts let me tell u gud news.

All students face turned into bright clr. Like vts it?

“our clg is organizing a tour to some places, tht u all gonna knw vry soon. U all hav to join its compulsory as after cmng back u hav to make a report on itn tht will decide ur assessment. Its not gonna be tht easy, we gonna divide u in groups n each of group will hav different topics so no scope of copying children’s. So u better be attentive. Now I take ur leave”

 

All were excited with name of trip as it gonna be fun going out with friends bt not happy with the report part.

The class was dispersed n group was sitting in the chorus to hav discussion.

Geet was taking notes from some other students as coz of maan she didn’t hear properly some part.

Sweety- so vts decided??? She agreed??

Maan said wih sullen face “no”

Sweety- I knew it… till geet was back

Geet- vt u knw sweety

Rohan- tht u r not cmng for movie.

Geet- oh hoo.. we’ll go some other day na, now we shd discuss abt the project tht teacher told us na.

Sweety- okk..

Maan n kritika was shocked like why sweety agreed n didn’t made her agree for outing. She simply agreed with geet

Geet gave a smile to sweety.

Geet- okk guys, I’ll chk which places r selected for trip n dn hav to google it, will help in project

 

(stinna- damm, she is such a padhaku)

 

When geet left. All others gave sweety look like throwing daggers on her

Sweety- wait guys, isse krne do project, hum isse le hi jayege ghumne. Akhir mera superb brain kab kaam ayega

Rohan- ohh vry funny, vaise tere paas brain aya kab?

Sweety- tere aane se thik 2 min phle

Kritika- ab???

Sweety- aree I’ll call to mom tht project mila hai n we r doing it at rosy’s home, simple!!!!

Maan- not bad.. hmmm

Sweety did collars up action.

 

Geet came with the list n forms to be fill up.

Hy guys!!!! These r  list of visiting places

N these forms which to be filled up tody as trip is scheduled for day after 2moro.

Maan snatches the list n speaks aloud.

1.   Agra

2.   Amritsar (Punjab)

3.   Manali (J/K)

4.   Jaipur

 

Kritika- I think we shd go to manali, thanda thanda coool

Sweety- lets go to pink city

Geet- hum agra chlte hai na, we’ll see taj mahal

Maan- hy lets go to Amritsar. We’ll visit golden temple

Kritika- han han aapto vhi jaoge, vo jo hai vha

Geet, sweety rohan were bewildered like kon  “vooo”

Maan- aree nhi mn toh bs ainvii keh rha tha. Its all upto u guys

Rohan- vaise vo hot hai n winked

Kritika- aree Amritsar mei maan k relatives rehte hai n their neighbor really like maan. She is head over heels on him

Sweety- ooohhh!!!!

Geet didn’t say anythg.

Kriya- guys we shd go to manali na. mountains. Super fun. Vt say

 

All r thinking where should thry go.

I between forget about the movie plan.

 

PRECAP- WHERE U WANT THE TRIP???

if u ask me i wuld say amritsar as live in punjabSmile n i knw abt places here, else i dont knw.

bt u guys shd suggest.

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AN EVENTFUL MORNING- OS

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 AN EVENTFUL MORNING!
 
MADE BANNER IN HASTE, SORRY I MYSELF NOT SATISFIED. 
 
Its early morning. Sunshine cmng from the window tht is in front of king sized bedroom of the love birds. Both were sleeping peaceful in each other arms. Her head is lyng on his heart. Ears can hear his heartbeat. His lips were above his head n fingers nuzzling in her silky hairs. She stirred in her sleep “hmmm”
he tried to opn his eye lashes to witness the mst beautiful sight in front of him. His lady love in his arms.
Jaan” he called fr her.
“Let me sleep” she said in her sleepy tone hardly audible bt he knew her jaan is sleepy.
He called fr her again. “Jaan”
Hearing again she hide her face in Crook of his neck.
“Hmm naughty” she blushed with his cmnt. Then moved her eye lashes a lil to see him. Her eyes caught his perfwctt luscious M shape lips uff thy r soo kissable. She jst had an urge to seal those with her pinky ones. Maan caught the naughty glimpse in his mishty eyes n with no sec there lips were sealed. After having short of breath they moved back. Maan crassed her cheeks with his thumb. She blushed. Cheeks turned to crimson clr.
“Maan” aweee his name sound like a melody from his mouth he wish to hear this long day.l evn dn not get bored.
” Hmmm mishty” he replied to her lukng into her eyes.
Geet moved her hands on his stubble filled cheeks.
Her expresion changed whn she moved her pa on her cheeks. She sat up.
It was bizarre situation fr maan. He didn’t get vt happem suddenly to her. He tried to ask bt she didn’t tell n went to washroom. He tried to ask her again bt she said she ia cmng out in min. Maan went to his daily workout. When he returned his princess was sitting in front of mirror drying her hairs. She moved her slick finger kn hairs. Awee he jst stood there seeing her. Few drops were moving from tip of flick n landed to her bare neck. Its so seductive. He strted moving towards her. His eyes full of desire. Her forehead too hav sm drops of water. She took a small stone bindi n applied it to middle of her forehead. Then she saw him standing rite beside him. She asked moving her eye brows. He leaned towards her. Strted moving his finger on her nape softly . She closed her eyes with the proximity to feel his touch. He bend n sat there. Slowly inching closer. Her arms moved around his neck fr support. Position like him hugging each other. Her shampoo’s scent hit to his nostrils sending shiver n his sweat smell to geet’s nostrils evoking the desire. In swift movement her hand moves to his cheek. Her eyes shot open though maan’s were closed n he was inching closer. She moved a lil back. Maan sensed tht she is nt near her anymore so je opened his eyes. Whn he saw geet was standing at sm distance. He cupped her face n asked “vt happen jaan”
“Same maan” maan was bewildered with her cmnt .
“Maan see na the way u cupped my face I too wanna do it na” geet said
“So??”
“Arrr so kya?? U dnt understand na. Aapki daadi (stubble) maan. Chubti hai na. ” awe she said so sweetly tht maan had a sudden urge To pull her cheeks. N he did it. Geet got irritated n turned. “See I too wanna pull ur cheeks” dn she faced him. She moved his face to left n right “bt see aapki cheeks ho toh na, aise andar toh muh hai.. Huhh” she said making a pout.
Maan moved towards the mirror n saw his face.
“Dekhlo aapka face chupa ho gya hai” geet cmnted from back.
“Are nhi geet its fyn aur vaise bhi mje tumhare jaise gol gappa nahi banna”
Geet’s mouth turned to O shape. “Houu. U mean m fat? ? Btw its called healthy achha”
She pointed her finger towards him n took steps forward in reflex maan moved back. “Aur haan. Mje aapki ye stubble chubti hai so better u shaved or else nooo”
” vt? ?? Bt geet u knw I like this way” maan in a pleading tone
“Bt I dont”
“Dnt forget geet this makes me luk hotter n btw u too fall for my this look”
” ohh hello who told u?? Vo toh bs mera din khrab hoga tht I agree to marry u.”
“Achha g???”
“Maan m warning u shave it or I’ll nt cm near u. Huh” saying she turned n flew from there. Leaving confused maan.
Maan thought ” better u do smthg for this maan or else ye sherni tje apne paas aane v nhi degi”
Geet thought “ab kya kroge maan. Hmm aap mje stubble mei ache toh lgte ho par vo chubti v toh hai. I knw u not gonna shave it”
Tht day geet didn’t let maan once cm near her. She maintained a distance. Maan thought whn he will cm in evng all will b sorted out. Bt geet kept ignoring.
After 2 days geet was sleeping when maan called her. She tried to shoo him away bt
Maan was adamant to wake her up.
“Kya hai maan?” She stated rubbing her eyes with back of her hand. Her vission was blurred. She couldn’t see properly coz of sleepiness. Maan was sitting in front with his bright smile on his face tht was waiting for his wife’s reaction. Geet saw a chikna face.
(Stinna- Lolz actually shaved. Use word chikna as 1st I was to name OS as chikna maan)
She rubbed her eyes n opened to see same face again. Then her eyes were wide opn.
MAAN’S VERSE
here m trying mu best to wake her up to surprise her n she is sleeping. Damm she is truly a kumbkarn.
Omg!! Vt reaction she gave me by seeing me. Is she shocked or happy?
I gave her a toothy smile. While she came close n checked by moving my face to left n right. Next set of words told me tht she was nt expecting this 

“Maan m I dreaming or vt??”
“No baby its real” I replied to her
Her eyes were wide opn n were likw throwing daggers on me.
“Haw maan vt the hell u do it?” I was in bizarre. Vt did she jst say?? Hell?? She is the one who told me actually tortured me to do this, by no t cmng close n she is giving me vt the hell look? Oh god womens!!!!
I cupped her face “baby u said u want me to shave. See I did”
Geet made a pouty face n said “bt maan I was jst joking, I didn’t mean it seriously”
Omg!! Hw she can say she was not serious. Coz of her dam joke I actually shaved. I sacrificed my angry young look. I closed my eyes as reality hit hard on my chikna face.
“Bt geet why??” I asked “Elloo.. ab mje kya pta aap serious ho jaoge?”
Serious? ? She was not? Dn bt was not cmng close, near ban??
“Bt u dnt evn let me cm close fr 2 days”
“Vo toh bs ainviii”
Huhh this geet n her stupid antics with her idiot wishes. Soon I think I’ll b doing am more stupid things. Now how m supposed to go to office taking this shaved face?? No1 gonna get sacre. I sat on bed with sullen face
Geet came in front. “Vaise maan itne bure bhi nhi lg rhe” I shot an angry glare
“Boht hi cute lg rhe ho aap. Sachii” with tht she strted laughing.
Uff geet dont. This smile only makes me weak in front of u..

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thts it he grabbed her n nxt momemt she was beneath him. ” bda mza aa rha tha na tumhe, ab btata hu”
Maan took her lips with his. Awe he was tasting her after long 2 days. How much he missed.
He broke the kiss with short of breath
“Coz of u I shaved, hw I’ll go out? Every1 gonna make fun of me”
He nuzzled into crook of his neck.
“Koi baat nhi ghr ki hi kheti hai vapis aa jaygi” she winked n kissed on his cheek
“Luv u maan. Coz of me u did this” her eyes hav so much love for him.
“Maan Singh khurana can do anythg for his wife”.
They hugged each other.

 
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