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PART 20
Maan- hy lets go to Amritsar. We’ll visit golden temple
Kritika- han han aapto vhi jaoge, vo jo hai vha
Geet, sweety rohan were bewildered like kon “vooo”
Maan- aree nhi mn toh bs ainvii keh rha tha. Its all upto u guys
Rohan- vaise vo hot hai n winked
Kritika- aree Amritsar mei maan k relatives rehte hai n their neighbor really like maan. She is head over heels on him
Sweety- ooohhh!!!!
Geet didn’t say anythg.
Kriya- guys we shd go to manali na. mountains. Super fun. Vt say
All thought for sometime n dn it was decided tht they will be going to manali though geet don’t want to go thre
Maan came to geet side n teased her a lot like she is scared of going to mountains n geet frowned by his continuous teasing.
She stomped her foot n went from thre
All laughed by geet’s departure.
Sweety- vt maan, why u alwz tease her. Dekho gussa ho gae vo
Maan- are yr its fun. Aur naarz hona uska roz ka kaam hai.
Chill I’ll be back
Maan followed geet to manofy her
Geet went to garden n sat on the bench in middle.
Geet murmured- huhh samjhta kya hai vo apne aap ko. Huhh
She took out earphone from her bag n plugged it to her mob n played song.
Maan came thre n heard her whisper. He was abt to tap her on shoulder when he heard his name n stopped in mid to listen vt she is saying.
Geet- mn koi nhi darti mountain se, huh, jaugi ab mai manali fr us maan ko btaugi. Grhh!!!
Maan(st) sara din bs meri burai krti rehti hai
Geet- are geet bt u knw na mountains r too high, she made a cute pout
Maan chuckle to it (st) aa gae line pe.
Geet- koi na, sweety prem sb honge vha, chill. Hmm
She hummed the song playing on her phone.
Galliyaan galliyan teri galliyan.. mujko bhave hai galliyan teri galliyan
Maan jumped from back to the bench which make geet startled
Maan took one side of ear phone n put to his ear,
Maan- are let me too hear which song u listening.
Geet- uff maan, is this way to come
Maan- so vt??? I toh do like this
Maan- waoo geet u too listening this song. Gud choice
Chlo kisi cheez mei we r same.
Geet gave whatever look to maan n dn snatched her ear phones from him ..
Geet- why u came here?
Maan- geet is this bench have copyright of ur name???
Geet nodded to no not understanding his question
Maan- toh mai jha mrzi baithu, tumhe kya
Geet got angry n stood up,
Maan hold her hand from back n made her stop in her track .
Maan- achha chl sorry. Vo teri sweety keh rhi thi tu naraz ho gae so I came
Geet-its okk
Geet was abt to go when maan pulled her backward n geet fell in maan’s arms. She got angry n shot her big eyes to maan
She struggled to let her free
Maan- chill darpok.sit na. why u alwz kept running??
Geet- she straighten herself n then her hairs.- thre’s nthg like tht
Maan- so all set to go??
Geet- hmmm..
Maan- aree yr, mza ayega believe me.
She nodded
Maan- chl lets sumbit the forms.
All headed to canteen together
Kritika came close to rosy n whispers- I told u thye look perfect .
N winked back to her
Kriya fumed seeing them together
Cant she leave maan alone. She thought .
Maan- lets get the forms fill guys
All strted filling it
Kritika- vaise maan bhai if u want toh we can go to Amritsar?
She said in teasing tone
Prem- han aur apni us se bhi mil lena
Maan- shut up guys.
Geet was curious to knw abt tht girl. She shrugged the thought behind’
All submit the forms n dn departed to their homes.
Geet informed at home abt trip,,
Brij was not agreeing to it bt dn saying it is compulsory they agreed.
Later on video chat
Sweety, rosy n kritika made plans to go for shopping bunking some lectures.
Geet heard it n like It was one of the moon day night. She too agreed,
Sweety said she shd get sm dresses for trip.
All were super excited abt it.
Next day
Geet n sweety informed to their mother abt their shopping as they wuld need the money so need to tell banker. Lolz
They attend 3 lectures n then came out of clg campus. Car was waiting for them. Geeet glared sweety realizing tht boys too are going to come
Sweety- are yr hume hi new things nhi chahiye, thy too want it yr
Grls came n sat to backseat, maan n prem were in front seat.
Rohan came there, he saw sweety goig out so he followed. When they were abt to go rohan came in front
He asked gesturing through his brows.
Maan took a sharp turn n showed him tongue n zoomed out from there
Sweety gave a hi5 to maan n prem with this.
Then geet’s phone rang
“aree we r going for shopping to XYZ mall. Ya yaa u too come.” she hung the phone after telling rohan abt it.
Sweety- ab vo chipku bhi ayega
Geet- akeli tujhe new things nhi chahiye, he too want. She said copying her tone like she said a few mins before.
Kriya didn’t come to clg, she alone went for shop
(STINNA- chloo haddi khud raste se hat gae. Lolz)
They reached mall n roamed in many shops
Geet was looking for sm dresses n maan was in men’s section.
Geet took dresses n went to changing room.
All were in same shop. Maan went to biys’s changing room
Both changing room’s r separated with only a wall.
Geet changed to a pink salwar suit, she liked it.
Dn she wore red tank tops with black capris suggested by sweety
dress fitted her cur-vicious body perfectly, she is looking breath taking in it.
(assume the black top as red)
Geet- hmm achhi lag rhi hai.
Maan heard her voice n thought to tease her
Maan in different tone- hy gorgeous.
Geet heard n got lil scared. She saw here n there n found no1.
Geet- maybe sm1 outside
Maan- lukng sexxyy in red (maan peeped a lil by standing on bench to his side)
Her eyes got bigger with cmnt.
She asked whose it??? She called sweety bt she went to check more dresses.
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me too hav to re think n plot evrythg again as i forgot vt i thought before. so here is updte, hope u like it.
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PART 19
MADE NEW BANNER. HOPE ITS OK
The bell rang n they all hav to go to attend lectures..
Geet- ok we ll discuss it later.. lets goo now.
All headed towards the lectures.
In lecture room.. the lecturer was giving lectures.
Maan was not interested in it.. so was playing with the pen by putting it in his mouth
Rohan was making the cartoons sketch,
Geet n pari were listening the lectures.
The sitting arrangement was like. Addressed all with their name’s 1stletter
Geet- G, maan- M, pari- P, prem- Pr , sweety-S , rohan- R, kritika-K, karan- kr , kriya- H(as haddi.. lolzzz)
G# P# S# R#
M# Pr# K# Kr#
# # H# #
(HOPE U GET THE SITTING ARRANGEMENT. IF NOT THEN PM ME N CAN ASK )
Rohan nudged sweety n asked when to go 4 movie?
Sweety replied tht she don’t knw.. let ask all.. rohan said tht hw this can be happen??? When tht sadduu is giving lecture
Sweety- no fear whn grt sweety is here.. rohan laughed at his comment
Lecturer- silence sdts.. give attention.
(sweety n rohan were sitting close, so they were talking)
Sweety wrote on a paper n crushed it n then saw the saddu n cleverly throw it to maan.
Maan got it n saw sweety who grinned her teeth. Dn maan opened it.
” vt abt movie?? Make ur sherni agree or else???”
Maan wrote smthg In it n throw it towards sweety.. sweety got it n saw
“yupp we ll go, bt hw to make tht ziddi grl agree??”
She turned n saw maan n she made a puppy face.
Maan took a piece of paper n wrote smthg in it n throw it to geet’s bench.. geet saw here n there n dn back. To which maan jst showed his teeth
Dn signaled her to opn it..
Geet opn it
“moti if u don’t go na dn I’ll alwz call u moti”
Geet loudly said- houuu with O Shape mouth
Saddu(lecturer) turned n saw geet with open mouth- vt happen??? Do u hav any doubt???
Geet stammering- g sir.. g.. nhi kuch nhi.
Saddu nodded n strted writing smthg on board
Geet then turned n shot an angry glare to maan like she will eat him
Pari asked geet vts in paper. Geet cant show him or else she will also call her moti. Lolzz tht she don’t want
Geet dn wrote smthg on it n throw towards maan.
“dare u call me with tht name. or else I’ll tell ur secret to all”
Maan got confused like vt secret she knws of him.. he don’t hav smthg to hide.
He wrote n throw to geet
“oyee konsa???”
Geet then thrw back
“u forgot??? Abt morning call. Hmmm I guess ur alarm.”
Maan when read this his eyes popped out.. he thought- if any1 cmes to knw abt his fevicol dn vt all will say????? No he ant afford this.
All the while maaneet were talking one person was fuming n was crushing her notebook by her own
Kriya didn’t liked this. Her eyes were on them only.
Maan was hell confused to how to make her agree. As she is super ziddi.
Lecturer- so stdts let me tell u gud news.
All students face turned into bright clr. Like vts it?
“our clg is organizing a tour to some places, tht u all gonna knw vry soon. U all hav to join its compulsory as after cmng back u hav to make a report on itn tht will decide ur assessment. Its not gonna be tht easy, we gonna divide u in groups n each of group will hav different topics so no scope of copying children’s. So u better be attentive. Now I take ur leave”
All were excited with name of trip as it gonna be fun going out with friends bt not happy with the report part.
The class was dispersed n group was sitting in the chorus to hav discussion.
Geet was taking notes from some other students as coz of maan she didn’t hear properly some part.
Sweety- so vts decided??? She agreed??
Maan said wih sullen face “no”
Sweety- I knew it… till geet was back
Geet- vt u knw sweety
Rohan- tht u r not cmng for movie.
Geet- oh hoo.. we’ll go some other day na, now we shd discuss abt the project tht teacher told us na.
Sweety- okk..
Maan n kritika was shocked like why sweety agreed n didn’t made her agree for outing. She simply agreed with geet
Geet gave a smile to sweety.
Geet- okk guys, I’ll chk which places r selected for trip n dn hav to google it, will help in project
(stinna- damm, she is such a padhaku)
When geet left. All others gave sweety look like throwing daggers on her
Sweety- wait guys, isse krne do project, hum isse le hi jayege ghumne. Akhir mera superb brain kab kaam ayega
Rohan- ohh vry funny, vaise tere paas brain aya kab?
Sweety- tere aane se thik 2 min phle
Kritika- ab???
Sweety- aree I’ll call to mom tht project mila hai n we r doing it at rosy’s home, simple!!!!
Maan- not bad.. hmmm
Sweety did collars up action.
Geet came with the list n forms to be fill up.
Hy guys!!!! These r list of visiting places
N these forms which to be filled up tody as trip is scheduled for day after 2moro.
Maan snatches the list n speaks aloud.
1. Agra
2. Amritsar (Punjab)
3. Manali (J/K)
4. Jaipur
Kritika- I think we shd go to manali, thanda thanda coool
Sweety- lets go to pink city
Geet- hum agra chlte hai na, we’ll see taj mahal
Maan- hy lets go to Amritsar. We’ll visit golden temple
Kritika- han han aapto vhi jaoge, vo jo hai vha
Geet, sweety rohan were bewildered like kon “vooo”
Maan- aree nhi mn toh bs ainvii keh rha tha. Its all upto u guys
Rohan- vaise vo hot hai n winked
Kritika- aree Amritsar mei maan k relatives rehte hai n their neighbor really like maan. She is head over heels on him
Sweety- ooohhh!!!!
Geet didn’t say anythg.
Kriya- guys we shd go to manali na. mountains. Super fun. Vt say
All r thinking where should thry go.
I between forget about the movie plan.
PRECAP- WHERE U WANT THE TRIP???
if u ask me i wuld say amritsar as live in punjab n i knw abt places here, else i dont knw.
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thts it he grabbed her n nxt momemt she was beneath him. ” bda mza aa rha tha na tumhe, ab btata hu”
Maan took her lips with his. Awe he was tasting her after long 2 days. How much he missed.
He broke the kiss with short of breath
“Coz of u I shaved, hw I’ll go out? Every1 gonna make fun of me”
He nuzzled into crook of his neck.
“Koi baat nhi ghr ki hi kheti hai vapis aa jaygi” she winked n kissed on his cheek
“Luv u maan. Coz of me u did this” her eyes hav so much love for him.
“Maan Singh khurana can do anythg for his wife”.
They hugged each other.
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