WHOSE HALKAT JAWANI WAS BETTER????? N U LIKE MOST??
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GUESS WHO IS SHE???? Sexy lady on floor??
PART 27
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PART 27
this time updte is lil small i knw
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mking puppy face
Rohan- btw where u both were??????
Sachii bta bhukadd kya kha k aye hai??? Ye kya lga hai???? N pointed to geets lip
Maan remembered the moment when he himself did this. Bt he forget to take advantage of it.
His naughty plan was in vain. How he can forget this.
He let out a sigh!!!!!
This is it. Geet was in sherni mode. He called him bhukad. How dare he.
Geet- rohan dont u dare to say this again. Btw y shd we tell where we were???
Aur khane ki baat thre is 1 more person who eat with me.
Bhukadd mn nhi tum ho. huhh
Rk- relax geet. Bas kr
Geet- huhhh n made pouty face
Rohan- achaa tu khush reh aur khaa jitna marzi, bs my champ shd be hot n handsome jst like me
Geet- vry funny
Maan excused 4m there to make some calls
Geet- vaise thankuu to u both for being with me all the time, n telling maan.
Rk- its fyn yr. u r our besty. Tere liye kuch bhi
Rohan- maan ko toh isliye btaya tha k he hav many contacts, so it will be helpful in finding out abt that pretty chudial.
Geet- huhh. May god gives this type of frnds to no1.. rohan n rk were bemused
As I hav u both n aise frnds mere hi ho skte hai, no1 else.
Trio shared a hug together
Then a sound came from behind
Mai bhiii
Geet found the voice familiar. She turned n saw the angel in front of her
She ran toward geet n geet gave her arms to encircled the small petty body of her n picked her up in her lap
Geet kissed on face all over
Whispering- awe my princess, mumma missed u
Jannat broke the hug n said while opening her arms wide- mn v miss u innaaa vala. Sachii
muchi?? geet asked her though she know tht how much she missed jannat, jannat too missed her
Maan came from behind with a smile on his lips. Geet turned to him n said thanx
Rohan said seeing the cuty- olee toh ye hai jannat
Jannat heard her name n said- yes, m jannat, papa ki jannat
Rohan- toh mn konsa the le k jar ha hu
Jannat- mn jauga vi ni.. aap gande uncle n showed her tongue
Geet heard her sayng the word- baby bad words. Say sorry. Who told u this word?
alee mumma, vo doremom mei gean hai na ganda, motuu sa. She said while laughing n putting her hand on her mouth
I told u she is addicted to her doremon maan said . he sat on the chair near her
baby but ye vo nhi hai then geet said to jannat by pointing towards rohan
haan alee vo toh motuuu hai. She giggled. he said he will take jannat away from papa she turned towards maan
nahi na dada????? she asked maan abt this
noo princess. no1 can take u away from me maan said to jannat n jannat gave atoothy smile to maan n again showed her tongue to rohan n then her small thumb saying do doo
mumma se v nhi jauga she hugged geet tightly
Rohan retorted ” bilkul tere jaise hai ye
Geet- haan I knw, pretty like me n winked
They talked for sometime then time to leave
Jannat- mumma chloo
Geet thought, how she can go there. If sasha comes to know abt it, maybe she will again harm maan
Rk- aree geet.. do 1 thing, u go KM, as u r jannats mom, the way u came to office u can go to home too
Rohan- sasha ko thode se tough look de dena
Geet- aaj toh vaise bhi bechari ki both band baji hai
Rohan- vt????
Jannat was feeling lil sleepy, she was half sleeping in geets lap
Geet- kl btaugi. Abhi..
Maan declared that she will go with him, without geets no ifs n buts
geet u r my wife, so there wuld be no prob going to home
geet nodded n both headed towards car, n rk n rohan moved to their place
in car
geet wants to go home with them, bt still there was some fear
maan placed his hand on geets hand sensing her tension n blinked his eyes, he ensured tht all will be ok.
geet m with u. hmm.. aur hum kisi k darr se door kyu rahe???? Aur jab maan singh khurana tumhare sath hai, toh darne ki kya baat hai maan said n lighten the atmosphere with his last cmnt
Geet smiled to it
hmmm.. aur fr mrs. Khurana hi kisi se nhi darti
Both giggled with their lines
Soon they reached home. It was dark outside, jannat was sleeping till now. She has content smile on her lips.
Maan came out of car n dn went to geets side, open the door n took jannat from geets lap. Both enter the KM n moved to room
(stinna- chavvi di happy???? Maan geet together n bck to home?)
From far person is having an eye on maaneet. He watched them going inside. He followed them 4m hotel. After it he made a call to some1 n inform abt them going inside
Maaneet was happy being together.
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PART 26
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“maan kuch zada tha. U shouldn’t be so vicious with her” geet said
“what???? Geet still u expect me too be gud with that fu***g b****”
“maan” geet said, she don’t want him to use such words tht useless ppl.
“okk. Wont happen again” maan smiled n geet nodded
“why u called” geet asked reason of calling her there
“eloo.. I hav right to meet u. u r my patni na” maan said mockingly
They were enjoying being together,
Maan stopped the car
Geet squinted her brows asking where they r going????
Maan blindfolded her with black cloth
Geet asked him vt he is doing????
“geet kuch der chup raho na. plzz” maan plead her
Geet kept quite.
Maan came out of the car n moved to geet’s side
He very carefully helped geet in coming out
He hold her hand protectively n led her in. they walked 15 steps when maan left her hand n came to her back.
Maan’s breath fell in geet’s ear. Geet felt Goosebumps with his closeness.
Her face shade become scarlet.
“stay here n don’t remove the cloth” maan whispers n left 4m there
Geet(st)- uff babaji, ye maan kha gaye hai???
Then maan’s voice came
“geet’. Take it off”
Geet strted removing the cloth while murmuring “uff shukar hai.. bt maan aap”
When geet was done. She saw straight where maan was standing.
Maan was standing in front with a chef hat n apron on him. And a cute smile on his face.
Geet asked thru his eyes vts this???
Maan came forward
So mam vt u will like to hav????
I hav- world’s best gol gappe’s ,
He was sluggish towards her.
delicious tikki with tangy flavor chatni,
He kept walking while saying with smirk on his face.
bhail puri, he was now fronting her
he came close. N huskily said “lots of dairymilk too” he showed her dairymilk.
He take it close to her mouth n geet took 1 bite of it.
Geet was astounded with this.
Maan knowingly put some dairymilk near her bottom lip n then took 1 bite of it.
“do u like it wifey???” maan asked looking straight into her eyes
Geet’s eyes showed some naughtiness. She moved back n then saw the stall.
“hmmm .. achha hai. Maan aap both kanjoos ho”
Maan squinted his eye balls. “mai aur kanjoos”
“why that so??” maan asked geet coming near her
“aur nahi toh kya???? Huhh chocolate dib hi vo bhi 5 rupee vali aur vo bhi half khud khali” geet said making a face ignoring him.
“ab mn chocolate share v nhi kr skta hai??” maan asked geet
“aur ye sab???? Aap ne toh paise bacha liye. In sab chizo ko bnayega kon???” geet said while pointing towards the delicious food
“geeet.. thts not fair. I did all this 4 u. huuhhh” maan made pouty face.
“oh hoo maan.. I was joking” geet pulled maan’s cheek.
“achha ab kuch khilaoge ya???? Paise bachane hai??? She said last words in whisper bt maan’s ear was on her only n he heard it
“geet u hav to pay 4 this???” while maan came to that stall.
Geet made a O shape mouth “ab iske paise mn dugi kya?????”
“noo shona. I was sayng abt the words u said. Now tell vt u will hav?? I thnk gol gappe” maan asked her
Geet nodded feeling excited to hav it
Maan wore the gloves n mixed the material.
He gave her plate. Maan then served her golgappa
Geet gulped it in 1 go
While having it “mahhaan iikka pani do na”
“geet 1st eat na. then say” maan said while making 1 more n served her
Geet finished the 1 that was in her mouth “hmm.. I was saying.. tikha bnao.”
Then geet asked him to hav it.
She put the 1 full in his mouth. It was with spicy water only. Maan don’t hav habit to hav it. His breath choked.
Geet searched 4 water. she got bisleri water bottle. N gave it to maan, he drank the water. N felt relieved.
“geet u r not going to have it.” Maan ordered worrying abt her health
“houu maan. I like it in this way.” How can maan say like this, its her fav. She made golgappa face
“geet itna tikha nt gud na. u hav smthg else.. bhail puri????” maan asked n told to tr smthg else
Geet nodded.
Maan moved to tht stall n made bhail puri 4 her mishti
he brought it to geet in a cuty way. “here it is. World’s best bhail puri by world’s best chef n for best wife”
geet took it n hav 1 spoon of it.
She asked him. Geet took spoon near his mouth, maan open his mouth bt then geet moved the spoon to her mouth
After havng it, geet showed him tongue.
Maan glared her
Then geet again took spoon of bhailpuri to maan. Maan moved his head to other side, geet came to tht side, forward the spoon bt maan moved his head to other side
“achha baba sorry na” geet made a pleading face n then again asked him
Maan hav it. Geet smiled.
“abhi mje v toh do na” geet then said
Then maan made her eat it.
Then after spending some quality time together both moved 4m there
Then maan stopped the car infront of hotel.
Geet asked “maan hum yha kyu aaye hai???”
Both entered the hotel n thre her frnds rk n rohan were sitting. Both were glaring at them.
Maaneet sat on chairs with them n said helloo
Rohan- u knw hum log toh yha makhiaan maar rahe the
Geet- ohhh achha tabhi yha pe koi nhi hai. Gud job
Rk- kha the tum???? We r waiting 4 half an hour yr
Rohan- haan.. aur yha toh koi hot si he roamed his eye balls n dn saw maan he changed the line to hot coffee bhi nhi hai
Rk n geet suppressed their laughter
Maan- yaa tell kya pta chla
Rk- tht doc is not in city now. Bt his family is in city hope so
Maan nodded
Maan- n evry month a grt amount of money is deposited in sasha’s a/c n I told my investigators to knw abt it n they r going to give me all info abt the calls sasha’s call too
Rk- grt news
Geet- toh isliye hum yha aaye.. maan aapne investigation strt bhi krdi
Maan- geet I hav to do this long before. M sorry coz of me u hav to suffer a lot.
Maan’s eyes was showing guilt.
Geet placed her palm on maan’s cheek n gestures to no no.
To lighten the atmosphere rohan changed the topic
Rohan- btw where u both were??????
Sachii bta bhukadd kya kha k aye hai??? Ye kya lga hai???? N pointed to geet’s lip
Maan remembered the moment when he himself did this. Bt he forget to take advantage of it.
His naughty plan was in vain. How he can forget this.
He let out a sigh!!!!!
This is it. Geet was in sherni mode. He called him bhukad. How dare he.
Geet- rohan dont u dare to say this again. Btw y shd we tell where we were???
Aur khane ki baat thre is 1 more person who eat with me.
Bhukadd mn nhi tum ho. huhh
Rk- relax geet. Bas kr.
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PART 25
@ALL THANKS 4 UR LIKES N CMNT.
@parmishty di replied to u.. above
@chavvi di- clg is soo boring di. 2moro my 1st test n i didnt prepared for it fully. jaise hi book opn ki neend aane lgi n eadce hone lga clg mei no free time. hows u?
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PART 25
sorry for giving it late nite, bt got time now.
as i said sunday m gonna updte. so m here. otherwise i wanna post it 2moro coz of test. mummyyy. i iddnt prepared 4 it.save me!!!!!!!
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“did u take ur med?” it was from maan.
Geet made a pouty face
“huhh msg kia bhi toh kia..”
She got another msg
“don’t make tht funny face. 1st take them”
Geet smiled n took tht medicine from side table tht she don’t want to take. Bt then she hav to
She gulped it 1 go n made a yucky face.
“maan you hav to pay for this” geet said like threatening him as if he is infront of him
Then her phone rang. She hurriedly picked it
When geet could speak or say smthg she heard a beautiful voice
“mummaaa…. Mishh u”
Awe her darling’s voice. Its alwz a bliss to hear mumma from her mouth
“miss u too princess” geet said giving a kiss on phone
“mumma papa sabse ache hai aur mje aj ice cream v khilae” she gave a toothy smile to maan.
“aur papa ne v khae?” geet asked her
Phone was on speaker so maan said “kyu mere khane se kya hai??”
“haan mje sab pta hai. U like tht ice cream thts y u alwz give her n eat urself taking her name” geet said this as she knew this habit of both, having ice cream
Maan was abt to speak when jannat interrupted
“mumma aap ghr a jaoo fr aap v khana yum yum vali ice cream”
“yess. Very soon jannat.” Geet too want to be with her
“baby now u sleep okk. We’ll talk 2moro..
Maan tell her a sweet lullaby okk.” Its getting late so geet said bye
Maan n jannat said in huddled. Byee. Umaahhh
Geet too did ummaaahhh”
Call ended.
Maan changed jannat in her night suit n put her in bed n tucked the duvet.
He too came under the duvet
Jannat cuddled near maan n maan place a sweet kiss on her forehead .
Soon jannat went into a deep slumber.
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Next day maan was sitting in his cabin
Tody he didn’t shout at any1. He was desperately waiting for geet to come.
Then suddenly he felt something.
Like sweet n cold winds of love strted blowing
(stinna- lolzz office mei konsi hawaeye????? Hahahha fullon filmy cum serial cum ff scene.. abhi geet ayegi toh hwa chalegi hi. Hai na????)
Geet enters the office n walked through the corridor. Geet too felt the certain scent hit to her nostrils.
She rancid the air.
She was walking through maan’s cabin n stopped n saw maan
Whose too eyes were glued on glass door to hav her 1 glimpse.
Geet smiled seeing him waiting 4 her
Then she passed from their n entered to her cabin.
Maan called sasha
When maan saw sasha, his blood starting boiling. He trusted her n she, vt she did to him??? He wont forgive her for this sin. Of separating him with his love
Maan’s face was in grimace
He said her to make blueprints of a project n a quick presentation of it. He said tht he need it ASAP, he knws tht he will do it. Only she can do it such a short span of time.
Sasha was happy hearing gud words from his mouth. She went out n strted doing work.
She hav such short time bt she was suer he will do it. She made rough figures of it.
After half hour.
Maan called an urgent meeting where geet was also present.
They didn’t talk as usual, as they don’t wanna give any hint to sasha.
In meeting lights were off as presentation was going on a project. N sasha was dictating all the points.
On the other hand, in the dark room maan’s eyes were on a hazel orbs that were shinning. Geet saw him starring at her. She couldn’t handle is burning gaze on er.
She smiled seeing him. Her cheeks turned to crimson red. She felt shy n dn moved her eyes towards sasha.
Maan called the meeting purposely. After 5 min sasha ended the presentation n lights went on.
Sasha was waiting for maan to say abt it with smile plastered on her face.
Bt she didn’t knw abt maan’s intention
She thought for the honey comes out bt it went opposite. Maan blasted on her.
Maan- vt the hell is this. He threw the files on floor.
He saw towards her with immense hatred n eyes spitting fire.
“Sasha” he called her. Sasha was bemused. She quiver with his loud voice. she don’t knw vt she did???? She did exactly vt maan said. Then????
“I told u to make the blueprints on vt location u did what???? 1st listen to ur boss carefully instead of doing the gossips in my office. I don’t pay u for this.” Maan spit out the words 4m his mouth.
It was not bizarre for the staff to hear these types of words bt new is to whom he is blasting. He never said anythg to sasha, as of being a loyal employee from many years.
There was sheer anger in his voice.
Though maan was stealing glances on geet bt he too listens the presentation in b/w.
Sasha started shaking n her eyes welled up.
Geet saw maan, she knew why he is doing this. She was happy bt sad too. Happy as sasha deserves this bt sad seeing her insult in presence of all staff.
“what did I told u??” mana asked her. Maan was getting frenzy now.
“vo MK.” Sasha couldn’t say anythg as she was not getting abt mistake, fault she did.
“The entrance was from the east, leave that u took wrong figures too” maan stated the reason
Sasha mull over his words, she didn’t remember of saying abt entrance.
The maans stated “u r out of this project” he left from there.
After his leaving all other employee came out.
Geet was moving out when she too came back
She was fronting sasha.
She patted on sasha shoulder who was standing with her head bowed. Sasha was in fidgety.
“its okk sweety try to concentrate on work not in some1’s life. she said stressing the last words of her sentence”
“I think u r getting old thts y don’t remember things. Eat 4 almonds daily. Yaa gud for ur small dirty brain” geet sneered.
Geet too left 4m there.
(stinna- hahahhaha.. I m laughing on sasha’s plight. Hope u all r satisfied??? A lil ???? it’s a lil fiddclt 4 me to type this scenario as its not of my type. I like funny things more. Do tell hows it)
Maan texted geet. Geet received n came out of office. No1 dare to ask abt where she going.
All knew maan goes out 4m office angrily..
Geet walked 10-15 steps on road when he came to her sight. She smiled n came there n sat in the car.
“maan what was that???” geet asked her while sitting
“I don’t knw abt vt u r talking?” maan strted driving “hmm I guess these r building n this is car n thts road n many things geet. Stop asking silly question” maan stated
Geet squinted her eyes n then she hit playfully on maan’s arm
“maan kuch zada tha. U shouldn’t be so vicious with her” geet said
“what???? Geet still u expect me too be gud with that fu***g b****”
“maan” geet said, she don’t want him to use such words tht useless ppl.
“okk. Wont happen again” maan smiled n geet nodded
“why u called” geet asked reason of calling her there
“eloo.. I hav right to meet u. u r my patni na” maan said mockingly
They were enjoying being together,
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