PART 24

 

Hello guyss.. as m giving updte on weekends only dn was thinking shd i end this story in 6-7 prts by making in fast pace??? or u r ok with one updte in week??? 

n yaa response is also less, many r not interested 

now decision is upon u all. rply plz.

 

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PART 24

 

teacher said to sit quiet on their seats.

All were surrounded them. When teacher came all moved to their seats.  all were dispersed to different positions.

As a result maaneet were left sitting together.

Geet had done the dressing still she was concerned for maan’s wound. She asked him twice abt hows it n maan alwz replied politely tht he is fine, though there was some pain.

Geet took her handbag from sweety n took out a pain killer tablet from it n gave it to maan

Seeing the big tablet tht seems like a monster to maan he made a pleading n yucky face like how maan’s small mouth able to gulp tht big tablet.

Geet glared him with her big eyes. Her face was stern  n maan was left with no other option n gulped it down shutting his eyes tight,

 

Stinna wonders maan babu u r a big boy bt still afraid of tablets

 

Then geet srted reading her novel n put the glasses on her hazels

Maan was seeing her first time wearing glasses.

Maan- no wonder u r soo studious. .

Geet gave keep-quiet look n maan was like a child whose mother refuse to buy his fav lollypop.

Maan- y u sitting beside me, when u r not evn talking to me n making me hell bore.

Geet- m reading maan

Maan- ohh really!!! I thought u r digging the earth. Gave a sarcastic look.

Then a sound came from behind 2 seats, tht sound like a irritating sound to geet

“maan u r fyn na??” tanu asked loudly

“yaa tanu m okk, bs getting bore u knw” maan answered

“ohhh” tanu said in a low voice.

Next moment tanu was standing near geet with a wide smile

Geet(st) huhh teeth toh aise dikha rhi hai like giving add of colgate.

Tanu- u can talk to me maan, m too getting bore

Maan- its okk tanu. U shd sit, aise yha ??? n look towards geet who gave a stern look to maan

Like m-not-gonna-stand look.

Tanu was seeing geet like she wuld stood  up n she will sit beside maan n tht golden opportunity to be close to him

Bt geet was not liking it

Geet- tanu u shd let maan rest, u knw I gave him pain killer. N if u getting bore then I recommend u to play some game na.

Yoo geet gave answer with anger tone.

Maan too nodded as he dnt want to be with chipku.

A champu boy with whom tanu was seated, he was wearing big glasses n hair oiled  wearing check shirt.

“tanu m ready to play with u”

Tanu cursed him under her breath who is ruining her plan.

Alas she had to return to her seat as teacher didn’t allow to stand in bus as its not safe as they r heading towards mountains n roads r bumpy.

 

Stinna- guys I dnt knw how much time it wuld take for reaching manali from delhi, so m taking writers liberty n writing time as per my assumptions. I knw timings from my residence lolzz

 

Time passes n it was nearly 1pm. All were hungry n they stopped at near by dhaba on the way.. when all were going out geet saw maan who was sleeping peacefully lying his head on geet’s shoulder. Geet didn’t realize before as she was engrossed in reading.

Sweety n kritika winked seeing them n gave each other a hi5.

Prem- I think we shd wake him up.

Geet- bt I think we shd nt.

Prem gave startled look by picking his eye brows up .

Geet- I mean, actually its after effect of medicine, thts y he is feeling sleepy. Vaise m not hungry, u guys carry on.

Karan- no geet u shd hav smthg.

Kriya- u go, I’ll be with him

Kritika- bt kriya if geet wuld stand maan will wakeup na.

Geet- u goo, if I feel like havng smthg will give u a call. Fine

All agreed to it n went to hav smthg .

 

All had their lunch, geet messaged sweety to pack 2 pratha’s with pickle n she will have it later when she will feel like eating.

 

Bus started n their journey started again.

As they are heading to great height the weather was pleasant. Cool breeze, blue white clouds n green trees, the view was overwhelming.

It gave a peace of mind, geet closed her eyes n was enjoying the weather, the cool breeze n the smell of wet mountains hit her nostril. She liked the nature a lot. There was a content smile on her face.

Maan stirred in her sleep n he slowly opened his eyes to get a beautiful view infront of his eyes. Geet sleeping with a smiling face.

He admired her angelic face, awe her  nose is cute. Her cheeks r rosy, some hair strands were coming in her face n blocking his view to face, he made a face n moved it behind from her face.

Her lips, awe soo luci.. he was abt to complete when reality hit him hard n he smacked his dirty mind. “uff maan wat r thinking dued, she is geet. Ur sherni. If she will come to knw abt ur thought she gonna eat u raw”

 

He then saw towards his watch it was showing time 4:30pm.. ohh dam he was sleeping from so long.

When his stomach made some sound.

Ohh he is starving. Maan texted prem “m hungry”

Prem replied back “u awake???? U kumbkarn kitna sota hai”

Maan “u shd wake me up yr”

Prem “vt to do, geet didn’t let us”

Maan “bt why??”

Prem thought why he is messaging him when he sitting jst on back seat. Prem stood on his seat.

“msg kyu kr rha hai mje??” prem asked

Then maan signaled to speak slow signaling to geet saying she is sleeping dnt disturb

Prem whispering “kabhi tu sota hai , kabhi vo”

Prem gave maan wrapped pratha’s n said him to eat it.

Maan grabbed it n when he opened he was happy seeing alloo pratha’s his fav. He strted eating it.

Maan’s cell beeped “bhukad there is geet’s share too, dnt eat full”

When he saw down he already had 1.5 paratha n only half is left.

Maan rolled it back n kept It for sherni.

Maan saw towards geet “u look soo innocent while sleeping, bt jaise hi bolti ho u become a wild tigress”

Geet slowly opened  her eyes yawning

Maan tuned his face to window side, fearing she didn’t hear it.

Geet sit properly on seat.

 

Time passes.. it was getting darker outside. Geet had the half parath left by maan cursing him tht it was her.

Kritika gave her chips tht she was carrying.

Soon the bus stopped infront of hotel, they reached the place named“mandi”

They went to their respective rooms after teacher telling them to be ready at 6am, so tht they can strt their journey again.

All had their dinner n went to sleep.

 

Next day.

They chit chatted in the bus, enjoying n playing games.

Their first destination was at religious place “mani karan sahib”

They reached there at 11am.

 

(stinna- I went to manali 2 yrs back,  so we went to gurudwara, so m taking this trip also their)

 

Mani karan sahib is located in near parvati valley. Gurudwara is near the parvati river, the speed of water is vry fast, when we crossed the bridge to reach in gurudwara the sound is tht high tht sound of our companion is hardly audible. Tourists r attracted to this pilgrimage bcoz of the hot water springs .

 

All students entered n then took the blessing by folding their hands infront of SHRI GURU GRANTH SAHIB JI. they prayed for their well being. 

rohan- hy babaji koi achi c ladki de do

geet- hy babaji plzz alwz keep evry1 happy n they shd keep smiling. take out all their stress from life. she smiled. 

maan was standing beside geet n praying. he opened his eyes to see geet still praying. he smiled too seeing her angelic face. 

maan- plzz god fulfil vt she is praying 

There is a separate place where where boiling water is there n ppl cooked rice in them. Then students vsited there. They proceed to to hav langar.

They enjoyed having the langar (food)

 

Then they explore the near by market n took rest for sometime.

 

PRECAP- MORE OF TRIP. DROP UR SUGGESTIONS TOO. 

HOPE MAANEET WILL Name THEIR ATTRACTION???

 

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PART 23

 

Hello guyss.. a big sorry for the delay in updte, actually my clg has been strted so was busy in this 1st week. 

bt vry much sad with such less response

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NOW GONNA UPDTE ON WEEKENDS ONLY 

 

PART 23

 

Bus started n all students strted hooting loud.

N teacher gave them deadly glares. Like it gonna put any effect on them

They shouted again

When . suddenly sm1 came from behind n put his palms on maan’s eyes

Guess who??

Maan was not getting who it could be. With the sudden person closing maan’s eyes all other too divert their attention to him.

Geet turned when maan was moving his fingers on the hand of the person n don’t knw why she didn’t like it

 

Stinna wonders ahaannn.. kuch jalne ki smell ni aa rhi???

 

Kritika fumed too seeing the person.

Uff here she came again.

Kriya- uff ye maan ka picha kyu nhi chodti??

Sweety pari n geet dnt knw abt her at all.

 

Maan first told kritika, the girl nodded no no.. “try harder”

Maan humed “okkk”

“is it u kriya”

“no dued, so it mnz u lose??”

“in ur dreams girl, maan nvr taste defeat”

 

Stinna wonders ishhh this attitude make girls gaga over him, no doubt. Wink

 

Now maan had said those words n he not even 1% know whose it?? Now he hav to think smthg or else his repo is on  stake.  Maan chided himself mentally “think dued think, smthg to trap her”

 

Then the girl screamed with the sudden pain she felt in her palm.

“u jerk”

Actually maan pinched her on the palm harder so tht she can remove her hand from his eyes, she  did remove 1 hand n in meantime prem hurridy whisper name in his ears.

Girl put her hand back on eyes.

“no cheating mr. accept ur defeat. Play fair” girl said

“no no.. I was jst playing dear.. jst making u desperate” he said with smirk on his face.

 

“okk tanu now stop n come” he decalred..

Tanu was starled how come he recognized her. She stomped her feet n remove her hands.

“u.. hw come u knw??” she happily asked him.

Maan stood n turned n sat on his seat “hw come I dnt??”

“so hows u here???”

 

Meanwhile on girls side.

Sweety tapped to kritika n she turned to give them a piece of mind.

Then she tell abt her to them

Tarunam kapoor uff tanu uff chipkuu uff chudail.. omg!! I soo hate her. She is maan bhai’s neighbor . she is 2 yr younger n she is head over heels behind maan. She make excuses to sneek to his house. They r also client of maan’s father so he nevr said anythg to her. Many times she came to her parties also n jst keep following him. She is crazy. She evn propose him twice. Bt evn after denial she is here.  Bt dnt knw how she is here in clg trip???

When she finished her biography of chipku, geet was shocked tht dnt knw how many grls r behind this cartoon.

 

Stinna “oh hello geet, weren’t u the 1 who was fuming a sec ago seeing the grl behind him, now calling cartoon, vry bad han.

 

“vaise maan u looking hot in this t-shirt..”

Geet’s ear automatically were now listening to their not-so-interesting convo.

Then actually geet saw the t-shirt, vt so special tht she is complimenting. It was a normal blue t-shirt he was wearing. 

Then she shrugged.

 

“thankuu. U too look gud”

Ohh she was flattered. His maan complimented herr. She gave him a dreamy look

“ohh r trying to woo me??? Btw no need as u knw m already. She winked.

Prem too stood on his seat folding his legs.

“achha come to point.. how u here in our clg trip” prem asked her

She shoot a glare to him

Then rohan came to her side

“oh ho prem u getting rude yr”

“so here comes the flirt. Cant spare any girl” sweety said under her breath.

Tanu smiled to rohan

“oh hoo.. actually not so difficult u knw, I got permission .i asked papa to arrange saying I hav project to study there n he talked with princi n here I am”

Prem- so actually u lied???

Tanu- aree nhii.. project toh hai, bt we hav 2 weeks. I thought to join u guys so earlier doing it, n I can do it through net though bt I told him tht personally I shd go through all this to get gud grades.

 

She winked to maan telling her story.

Maan turned her head getting irritated with this witch around her

 He whisper to prem “save me dued, she gonna spoil me trip”

He hav no choice so he gave a toothy smile,

Then both were back to their position.

 Tanu too seated there.

 

Sweety earing to geet- uff actually she is a chipku. Poor maan.

Pari- yeah!!!!

Geet didn’t say anythg. Like nthg is effecting her bt she is not having gud feelings.

 

Time was passing. All were chit chatting n rohan flirted with tanu too. He came n sat near her seat by exchanging it with other student,

Karan didn’t like this as he hav to sit with a grl. He was giving deadly glares to rohan. Then getting no choice he came back to his seat.

Then all thought to play antakshri with dancing too.

It was fun .

  Geet said she is not interested. She took out novel “I too had a lovestory” from her bag n strted reading it.

Maan came n snatched her book, her interest at tht moment.. geet jst fumed with this.

“geet dnt be a spoilsport n play yr”

“maan.. uu.. give it to me” geet angrily said to him trying to get back her novel.

She struggled to get it.. both stood up trying to snatch from eachother giving deadly glares no1 was giving up. They stood in centre space tht was in the bus.

“play”

“No”

“yes”

“no”

Others placed their hand on their forehead “uf they strted again with their silly fight”

Geet greeted her teeth “maaannn”

“I knw my name.. n yaa u reading vt??? He hav a look on novel .. ohh so miss.geet reading n lovestory. Oh hooo

Other studnts strted hooting with this revelation

“give it me back, now” geet exclaimed.

Maan snatched it from her. Geet tried struggling. With thisthe driver suddenly applied break  both lost their balance n both fell in the middle space of bus. with geet underneath maan. Geet closed her eyes bt maan was encircling geet from her waist to stop her from getting hurt. Saving her maan’s hand hit the seat’s hard iron n he winced. She opend her eys n saw maan.

All were shocked to see them. Two girls fumed. As u knw none other than kriya n now new entry tanu too.

Sweety kritika gave eachother dreamy look.

Geet asked maan in concern “vt happen??”

Maan nodded noo. He tried to get up. N after getting up he stretched his arm fro geet. Geet stood up with his help. When her eyes saw some blood on his arm. Her eye balls became bigger n she took her arm in his soft palms n checked it was bleeding.

Prem too came close to them

“oh gosh!! U got hurt man” prem said.

They immedailtey get the first aid done, yes geet did it.

Her face was so tensed.. maan saw her getting restless. She blow air while applying the detol on his wound. Strange geet winced when maan didn’t, how come he can feel the pain when he was busy admiring her. Staring the strands tht were falling on her cheeks n touching her cheeks. He put them behind his ear when geet saw up n their eyes met. Maan saw pain in her eyes. Dnt knw why bt he liked the concern in her eyes.

then teacher said to sit quiet on their seats.

All were surrounded them. When teacher came all moved to their seats. Lolzz all were dispersed to different positions.

As a result maaneet were left sitting together.

 

PRECAP- Dnt knw folks.

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Maaneet

 

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PART 22

 

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PART 22

 

BEFORE READING HERE IS SMTHG. LOLZZ JST TRIED HOW MAAN WILL LOOK WEARING CARTOON T-SHIRTS. 

 

 

 

They entered the lift. With them there was a couple too inside.. they went out when it nxt stopped.

Now maaneet left alone.

 

 

 

Geet- vaise maan, u really watch cartoons???

Maan nodded.

Geet didn’t say anythg. There was complete silence.

Then there was sudden jerk in the lift n it stopped, as it was not expected, geet lost her balance n was abt to fall

She thought she gonna touch the floor hard n will get hurt bt nothing of tht sort happen as two stron arms engulf her petty waist protectively

Geet slowly open her eyes to meet with the deep ocean like eyes.

Maahhhiii

Maan- I knw u not gonna thank me as alwz

This bring geet out of trance n then she stood on her feet properly.

Lift was stopped. Now the lights too strted blinking.

Maan pressed the buttons bt nthg happened n dn the blinking lights got off

There was darkness only

Geet got scared.

She called maan name

Maan jst said hmmm

Geet- u thre na?

Maan- uff geet is ther any way??? Or m a angel tht I’ll get disappear with my powers

Geet cursed him under her breath why to ask him, he alwz give him unusual answers.

Not angel bt pure devil.. grhhh!!!

Maan- did u say smthg??

Geet- when lift will get start

Maan- geet m not a mechanic yr, n yaa repeat of my dlg, m not angel ohh actually m an angel. U see m sooo handsome

He said in melo dramatic tone

Geet- ohh plzzz.

Maan smiled.

Geet’s phone buzz.. she received the call it was sweety

Sweety- where r u both???

Geet- aree we r stuck.. hloo

Oppss!!! How come there r signals in lift so call got disconnected

Geet tried calling her bt in vain

She slammed the phone on her palm “dam it”

Maan- chill sherni. Show some pity on poor phone. It hav feelings u knw

She gave bewildered look

Maan- now dnt give me tht looks okay. I cant see ur m-gonna-eat- u-alive look. Spare me yr.

She murmured n cursed him again- vts need to buy tht shirt,dumboo

Maan took his phone n turned to geet’s side. Maan was now seeing geet’s face in tht only phone’s light. It was glowing. There was shine in her eyes. Tht makes her look beautiful.

Geet was starled when she saw light n dn maan’s face caught her attention

In tht mere light geet saw maan’s face, his sharp features. His cut to cut perfect face.

Maan- geet stop cursing me, hav some patience.

Maan turned n then he strted playing candy crush in his phone.

Geet- maan its sound is so irritating,,

Maan- bt its fun. U wanna try.

Geet nodded to no.

Bt geet couldn’t take the sound so she warned him to low the volume by showing her index finger pointing it to his face.

Tht exact moment lift opened.

They were in pose like geet ready to kill him.

Ppl around were staring them.

Then geet straighten herself.. both came out of the lift.

 

They moved to parking n maan took keys of rohan’s byke from security as per told by rohan.

Geet sat on it

Maan- geet hold me

Geet- no m fine.

Maan- as u wish. Dnt say me afterwards.

Geet gave whatever look

 

They moved out of the mall. When geet got sweety’s call.

She told tht they were stuck in lift now they r on their way.

Sweety said tht they r in ABC restaurant.

They hung up.

Maan speed up the byke n as usual geet hav to hold maan form his shoulder. Maan smiled.

 

(stinna- kya planning maan babu??)

 

They reached the restaurant. Orders hav been arrived n they were abt to strt eating.

Maan- akele akele khaoo bhukadooo

Sweety- if u both can shop alone why not we can eat

They both took seat

Rosy- vaise why u both stopped?

Geet- voo..

All were staring her like she got 2 big thorns on her head

Geet- vt??

Maan- aree yr shopping kr rhe the. Now lets eat m starving.

They had their lunch talking abt trip. They gonna njoy a lot

Its their 1^st outing together.

Make the best of it.

They returned to their respective homes bidding gud bye n promising to meet 2moro morning in clg. Their trip was schedule  for day after 2moro

 

Reaching home, geet’s mom was shocked seeing soo much shopping bags.’

Rano- aree r u both planning to flew far way for like a month

Sweety hugging her mother from behind. – Areee aisikismat kha meri.

Geet- aree mumma. Ye aise kuch nhi hai

Rano- itna kya shop krlia meri bachion ne

They both showed evrythg to rano excitedly.

Geet showed her purse tht she bought for her

Rabo- learn smthg from geet sweety. She nevr forgets to get smthg for me. N u.. she hit playfully on sweety’s head

Sweety paid no heed n went to her room saying she is super tired

Rano- geet u too take some rest

\she took all her bags n went to room.

Geet was placing the things in room. When sweety’s eyes caught on beautiful pair of footwears.

Sweety- oyee when did u get these?? She excitedly took it from geet. Then eher eyes caught the price tag

Geet- aree I was not taking it, bt maan..

Sweety- ooohhh… in a teasing tone.

Geet- now ur not tired.

Sweety- yaa yaa.. she gave a cheeky smile,

 

Nxt day in clg was like all were bunking again bt with geet the exceptional case.

She bunked 2 lectures on others insistence.

They chatted where they were to roam, which places to see.

They googled the visiting places.

All were excited for trip,

Rosy n prem used to steal glances in b/w. their love story was in progress

 N karan n kritika were fighting in b/w

 

TRIP DAY.

All students were to reach there at sharp 5am, as it’s a long jourey, so they need to go early.

Early waking up.. ufff hell  difficult for maan.

Phones phone buzz with his alarm tone. “fevicoal see” he  snoozed it, it beeped again. He took the pillows n cover his ears.

Then he got continuous call from prem. He knows him tht he not gonna wakeup so soon. Thts friendship .

Geet’s mom prepared prathas for their trip. N both were ready. Brij dropped girls at clg.

Rosy kritika were carrying chips, cold drinks with them. Typical trip things.

All students were abt to go, as usual there were some late comers, who didn’t reached till now. Maan was 1 of them.

All seated in the bus its 5:10 am. The teacher gave warning to call their frnds or else they r leaving.

Kritika- bhai bhi na.. prem u didn’t wake him up??

Prem- I did yr.

They heard his sound. “m here guys” he climbed up in the bus..

He hugged prem “hy buddy”

Kritika- uff again late.

Maan- sorry.. prem mistake. Usne phle call nhi ki

Prem- oye jhoote.. 5 call k baad u picked ur dam phone.

Rohan- chlo leave. Lets get seated.

{ Rohan karan     kritika kriya

Maan prem         geet sweety kriya

Hope u get their seating plan}

 

Bus started n all students strted hooting loud.

N teacher gave them deadly glares. Like it gonna put any effect on them

They shouted again

When . suddenly sm1 came from behind n put his palms on maan’s eyes

Guess who??

 

PRECAP- NEW PERSON. GUESS?????

TRIP FUN.. ANY SUGGESTION ????? POST.

 

PLZZZ DO LEAVE UR CMNTS FOR THIS PART

WILL BE WAITING!!!

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MY CRUSH

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PART 21

 

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PART 21

 

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Geet- maybe sm1 outside

Maan- lukng sexxyy in red (maan peeped a lil by standing on bench to his side)

Her eyes got bigger with cmnt.

She asked whose it??? She called  sweety bt she went to check more dresses.

 

Geet- ye sweety kha gaee. Gadhi kahi ki

Maan- oh hoo, why u getting scared?? Believe me red suits u.

Maan was standing above n dn suddenly geet looked up n saw maan.

She saw him with her famous angry fumed eyes.

She too stand on stool in her room. She pointed her finger to him

Tum..

Maan smiling- hmm mai. Kyu koi aur hona chahiye tha kya

Don’t knw how geet’s foot slipped n she was lose her balance n was abt to fall bt maan caught her hand from above n made her stand

Maan- dhyaan se moti, bechara stool.

She freed her hand

Maan- thnku toh bol dia kro kabhi.

Geet- kyu tum mere frnd ho na, so no thnku. Huhh

R u not ashamed haan??? Aise koi krta hai kya???

Maan- uff !! tum thi so I peeped.

Geet gave bewildered look

Maan- vaise u lukng osmm in this, le le

Geet- i.. I don’t like. Nhi lugi huhh

Maan- as u wish.

Sweety came thre n heard her murmuring. Ye pagl  khud se hi baat kr rhi hai kya

Geet, kya hua? Try this dress. Jldi khol yr.

Geet gave maan a i-will-not-spare-u look n then opn the door.

Maan came down n tried vt he took for him.

Sweety saw geet- hmm achi lg rhi ye dress. Try this now. N handed geet a black jump suit.

She locked try room n was abt to change

Geet- maan plzz dnt peep now, u knw its bad habbits

Maan- huh aauga kya krogi

Geet almost pleading- plzzz maan.

Maan- hmmm. Achha chl bta ye kaisa hai???

Geet- kya

Maan- are dumboo my shirt. Aa dekh na

Geet climed up on stool n saw him.

He was wearing white t-shirt with written “I M THE BEST”

Geet- hmm achhi hai bt the words written don’t suit u. n showed him tongue.

Achha ab don’t peep haan.

Geet changed to the dress n was checking it the mirror.

Till maan changed to another t-shirt.

Maan- m cmng sexy!!

N here he was on top again peeping .

Geet glaring- I told u not to come.

Maan- vaise this is really cool, why u dnt wear such type of clothes yr.

Geet- kyu abhi nhi pehni hui kya

Maan- nhi like daily

Geet- huhh..

Maan- achha hows this t-shirt?

Geet jumped on stool  n saw maan wearing t-shirt with a cartoon on it.

Geet- maan r u kid??? Seariously u gonna buy it kya??

Maan-vts  big deal yr. its cool n cuty bheem yr.

Geet- u watch them??? She was shocked.

Maan fumbled n here geet got another secret of maan

Geet- oh hoo.. clap clap, the grt maan, the hotty watch kid’s carton

Maan put his hand on geet mouth

Maan- chupp moti.. geet again glared him

She gestured him to take his hand off

Geet- maan dare u call me moti again, m not

Maan- achha abhi when u was falling I saved u na, I knw ur weight.

Geet- n I knw ur 2 secrets. Achha g

Maan- geet dare u tell this to any1, n I dnt watch cartoons.

Sweety then came- geet kitna time lgaogi yr. opn up n come out.

Geet opened the door n came out

Sweety- ahannn lukng hotty hotty. Lets buy it

From another door maan came out bt after changing into his t-shirt.

Achha toh itna time lg rha tha.

Geet- nthg sweety. Achha I’ll be back. Wait haan.

Geet zoomed back in try room.

Sweety gave maan a teasing look n maan too went from thre

Sweety came to kritika n whisper- kuch toh hua hai, kuch ho gya hai.

Kritika didn’t get tht. Sweety signaled through eye towards maan n dn geet came thre towards geet

Kritika mouthed- I told u. n winked

They went to other shops n bought some more dresses.

Geet was passing by a shop when she saw a black t-shirt, written U ROCK font was really eye ecatching.

She called maan n he turned. All were heading towards the exit. He said he will be cmng, u go ahead.

Geet didn’t knw why she called maan.

Geet said maan to try this t-shirt. Maan was confused tht she want him to try this, bt then didn’t concentrate on it further.

They went to shop n maan tried it

Actually it suits maan a lot.

They bought it.

Maan got a call from prem- hy dude where u both yr??

Maan- are nthg yr, jst cmng in few mins.

Prem- yr rohan rosy want smthg from the way n all r hungry lets do 1 thing, u both come on rohan’s byke n we r heading ahead. Ok??

Maan- yaa ok. No prob.

Prem- btw where u both???

(prem too sensed smthg cooking so he hooked both them up )

Maan- nthg yr geet saw a t-shirt n we were jst buying it.

They hung the call

Geet- vaise u knw its better then ur cartoon t-shirt.

Vaise whose call???

Maan- they r leaving us, chl ab jldi .

Geet didn’t get it as maan dragged her towards the lift as it was getting close, bt alas!!! It door got closed

Maan- oh hooo.. cant u run???

Now u got a chance of byke ride

Geet- vt??? Care to explain

Maan- ur all frnds r hungry so they left us, we hav to go on rohan’s byke

Geet nodded.

They waited outside for lift to come.

She was seeing here n there n when eyes caught on beautiful pair of footwears. Her eyes twinkled. 

So she went thre

Maan saw her going- unbelievable , grls n their shopping

She went to shop n tried tht pair. She asked maan abt it.

  

Maan shows thumbsup as dnt want to waste time.

Geet saw the rate n was expensive so she dropped the idea of buying it.

Maan- vt happen??? Achi toh hai

Geet- aree nhi its okk. Chlo otherwise we will be late

Maan- aree bt why u didn’t buy it, u liked it rite

Geet- hmm.. bt maan vo mne phle dresses le li hai. N its quite expensive. So.

Maan- so vt?? I’ll get it for u.

Geet instantly no noo. Its okk.

Maan- aree yr its okk.. I’ll get it. Wait.

Till geet can stop him maan went to shop n bought the pairs n got it gift wrapped.

Maan came n gave to geet

Now thts from my side, u can call it rishwat he whispered cmng close to her ears.

Keep my secret only to u. hmmm

Geet smile n nodded.

They entered the lift. With them there was a couple too inside.. they went out when it nxt stopped.

 

Now maaneet left alone. 

 

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NEW OS

MY CRUSH

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MY CRUSH

hello!!!. hws u all doing??

me here again to irritate u all again with small sa story of mine. 

its an OS bt its abt 2500 words 

so this time plzz show some pity on my hands tht typed it n give me sm big vala cmnts. plzz

its on mstly geet’s monologue 

njoy reading

sorry for grammar n spell mistakes, didnt chk before posting nor read it  lazy me.

 

MY CRUSH

 

I still remember the day when he frst called me,

Then I was in I guess 6 or 7 class,  his voice was vry melodious to ears

I was standing outside  my class, actually was gonna enter n my frnd stopped me, then he came from behind. N called me give him a side.

Till then I actually nvr observed him tht he is in my class. Lolz quite funny. Bt m like this only, never bothered abt the classmates sry correction boys classmate in class.

4m tht day I used to observed him. Actually I really like him. My first crush. Ishh.. actually not first, it was hritik. Omg!! I used to copy all his steps n m crazy abt his dancing skills.

Now I m 10 class.. I really dnt get the guts till now to evn talked to him, to say a hi, to approach him. Such a fool I am. He is class topper n I, hy me too yr. though I came 2 or 3 in class n he alwz 1^st. he was quite handsome , tall bady, gud muscles in this younger age, he was best in sports n really do buttering to all the teachers n I jst hate sports, I cant run, n teachers I dnt like to get marks by moving around them like bees revolve around honey. .. all grls I guess droll over him& he being such a brat openly enjoys their starring eyes on him.

I mostly ogled over his M shape lips, lolzz so cheap thinking. Babaji save me no.

I used to stare him n frankly many a times I copied him. I had a habit of biting nails bt mom made me get out of it by scolding a lot.. bt then once I saw him doing so,n here I was doing the same.. I saw him tapping his feet on bench n here I was doing same. 

I never told abt this to any1. Alwz kept in my chitu heart. Sometimes he used to call me. Hayee tht time I love my name.. like its melody song n he is singing for me.

From my grp of frnds one grl used to talk to him. N it made me lil jealous off course yr. I like him na.

Then once we hav free lecture n all grls n boys srted playing bollywood game on board. It was quite fun. Tht day I actually firstly talked to him. I was like blushing. My frnd asked me why m smiling bt dare I didn’t tell the reason behind my crimson cheeks.

Then we used to play games. Then I talked to him vry often. Jst like did u prepare for test, did u do homework.

All our grp n his we played many other games, as in “NAME PLACE, ETC”

(stinna- its 1 of my fav game, if any1 want to knw abt it can pm me)

Dum sharaz, dam dam dup, bingo, etc

 

Once we had a test in class. N being an obedient student as alwz i prepared for it. He came n sat on bench ahead of me, I was starled when I turned n saw him n he was smiling to me.

 I asked vts matter

He like scratched his head n with cute expression said “hy geet” I too greet him with smile “hy maan”

Yaaa his name is maan, hayee babaji when I call his name I can like butterflies running in my stomach n shiver ran down through my spine.

“vo actually I havnt prepared for test tody, n yaa I knw u did, so plz let me sit here n I will copy from u” n he winked

Omg!! He actually seeked help from me n winked to me. I was on cloud 9..

Bt was bit scared abt copying. M not in cheating n all. Like he guessed from my expression

“oh u dnt worry, u jst sit, rest I’ll do, st dnt let teacher cm to knw. Plzz“

I jst nodded. How m supposed to say no to him, to my crush.

Then he copied from my notebook n I was sleeplessly smiling within only.

When he was giving the notebook to teacher he tuned to my side n winked me again.

After tht day he used to greet me when he saw me n I too respond to him with a smile, like a shy girl.

Few days passed like this. We bcm frnds like borrowing notes n asking for problems. I smtimes made his notes too though I hate this, bt for him I evn did tht.

 

 

After few days news spread like he was having an affair with girl of different section. I was shocked, surprised, angry at this. I knw he is like this only bt, this heart. Then I decided I shd control to my heart n talk to him less n distance myself.

 

Result declared as usual he was 1^st n 2^nd.  Now its  11 standard he choosed science  n I was in commerce.

I like sort of relieved tht now we wont be in same class n will get rid of this kinda feelings, bt was wrong again. When he came to my class my heart did skip a beat..  n I nevr dare to enter to his class unless hav some work there.

 

In my exams vt a strange thing happened. He was sitting rite in my front. We used to wish luck to eachother.

Once I saw him sitting idle in his entire paper, he didn’t evn write a word. I was shocked. Being a topper he shuldnt do tht. I asked him, he said he is not in mood. Then I thought he has changed ,with sort of company of boys like tht..

 

In our school we hav houses- like on Saturday we hav to wear colorful shirts- red, yellow, green n blue. N we both were in same house thts red.

So evry week we hav duty of discipline n control n on same floor. I was totally frustrated. Like why he is not leaving  my dam way. So we hav to meet n yes he talk n I jst give a nod to him.

 

Its like we are going for sm competition in other school. I was doing some comp related thing n he was in presentation. N we were in same bus, dam cant this school arrange diffrnt things for students of different streams.

On our way back he sat with me too..  n was praying tht there should be no pits on road or any chance he shndt come in contact with me.

 

 After 2 yrs.

In our farewell party.

In whole this year.  I tried my best to ignore him. N tody as all other grls I was dressed to kill according to me n mum. I entered the hall n like in films winds blow n my hairs flowed in air. N first thing I saw after tucking my hairs back I saw him, he was the in charge n doing all preparations.

I jst drool him, he was wearing a black suit, gelled hairs, red tie.

N here was in red clr anarkali suit. Ishh matching

Babaji is not showing any kinda signs na???? 

He came towards me, my beats strt rosing n I kept my heart near it.

He greet me n “hy geet lukng pretty”

Omg!!! He complimented me. N being a fool I didn’t say anythg to him n strted walking n then realized I tuned n I called him

“maan.” He asked through his brows

“thnks n yaa u lukng gud“

He smiled n said thanks to which I smiled n moved forwards

School announced the best student as Mr.xyz school as MAAN & Miss.xyz school as GEET.

Again signs babaji. Not fair haan. I knw we hav different paths n dn vts this?

We both shook hands with each other n then we both r made to walk on ramp together. I can hear all clapping n hooting from all corers to which I can only blush.

Now it’s all over. I cant see him anymore. Our schooling is completed.

I used to think abt him many a times.

Once I met him in my frnds brother marriage, he was lukng like a gentleman. Their we talked.

 

After few days I got a request on fb names “maan khurana” I thought for a while n then accepted it like vts big deal in it,

Then message appear on screen. He said hi.

I too reply with hi,

After normal convo, we chit chat wit each other

Actually its lil easy talking on chat than personally facing each other.

Tht way he cant see me smiling.

 

AFTER 5 YRS.

Though I pursue commerce bt then god has sm other plans n I joined tv industry. I jst love being here. Many ppl love me. They cry when I cry, laugh when I laugh.

Once I was to give a interview, tht day I was too tired n was in cranky mood. Then reported entered to my vanity. I jst shouted tht jst 15 mins nthg more.

He replied “sure mam”

It sounded a lil familiar.

Then I strted removing makeup n reported was setting his cameras, I saw in mirror.  One person left n other was sitting thre.

Then I settled n I came face to face with him. He asked me 2-3 ques n answered.

Then there was knock on door. A person entered I was facing the back. He asked reporter smthg n then he came infront.

I was like starled seeing him infront of me after so many yrs. 

He voiced out first “geet“

“maan”

“oh my my!!!jst look at u. the shy geet is now the GEET, most lovable actress”

I smiled n then I made him sit there

 Out of curiosity I too asked him abt him being journalist. He said tht science was not of interest so joined this. Its quite fun in this line. We meet celebrities like you. He winked seeing me.

I blushed.

Omg!!!! After years he still had this effect on me.

Hen he asked me abt being here, I told I love acting n dancing so here I am.

Then work come first he finished off the interview.

As its interview he came to knw abt my liking n my being here n yaa I told tht I do hav a crush on sm1. He was shocked hearing it.

Bt now I dnt mind telling tht I was head over heels in love with him.

Then he was abt to leave when we exchanged our numbers.

 

Now we meet quite often.  N again m falling for him.

 

MAAN’S verse

I was shocked to see her there. Geet, she actually was an actress. I cant imagine tht shy geet. She used to stutter evn when I talked with her. N here so fluently she was delivering the dialogues. N yaa she was lukng cute, beautiful n sexy too.. I nvr observed her in school. Tht she was wearing a skirt with shirt n her hairs alwz tied. N she was so studious. Hw cm I observe her. She changed a lot, she is the dhak dhak queen now.. After interview  I asked 4 her number.

Then I was having sleepless nights yr. she is soo dam beautiful. She is not leaving my mind evn 4 a sec. then I watched her all episodes of serial on utube n evn dwld it, her all interviews, her all dancing. When I was watching the romantic scenes I jst feel like punching tht guy hard on his nose. Omg!! M so much in love with her. Did I say love?? Oh yes. I guess love at first sight bt after year.

We met after tht encounter many times, n being curious I asked abt her crush in school. She didn’t tell me. I thought maybe she is not interested.  Then I nevr asked.

 

Geet’s verse

Now we r gud frnds. Maan is behaving wired from sm days. Dnt knw vt??? I was told by my one of co-actor tht he was starring at me. I didn’t pay any attention. Bt then I too saw him admiring me.

My co actor actually find him quite hot, yaa he is yr. n she vn told me too do smthg n hooked her with him.. I laughed on it n told maan abt it. We both laughed  n I saw in his eyes n was lost in tht deep ocean.

Maahhiii maahhhiii

Waiter came n we broke our eye lock, I was embraced n he, shamelessly glaring me. I hit on his arm.

Out of blue he asked

“achha geet, u too find me hot??”

Tht day he  was wearing a see through black shirt with black jeans. Yaa he was lukng hot n tasty.

I stutter to rply n stood up to go.

“bolo geet., n yaa I want truth.”

“hmm yaa. U r gud looking. Happy“

He smiled n we both headed towards his car. we came here as its his b’day n he want to celebrate it with me only.

Then we moved towards the beach. It was moonlight only cmng n making the atmosphere vry romantic. He sat on floor, the water waves were cmng  n sometimes touching r feet n the returned back.

He stood up n forward his hand, I didn’t understand n gave my hand.

“its my birthday geet n I .. n as a birthday present I want a yes from you..” I was not getting aythg n my expression culd tell tht

“I want u by my side forver, will be mine???

I want to love u forever

I want to hold ur hand on all paths of life

I want to do tht romance with u n not tht ugly guy” I chuckle with this when he call maybe my co-actor ugly.

 Some tears strted to form in my eyes. His eyes were shinning n were showing tht I was seeing from some days.  “love”

“I want to be the reason of this smile n tears of urs. Then he kneeled down n

Geet.. I love you.

M in love with u the moment i saw u.

Then I smiled n lone tear escaped from my eye n I nodded.

He stood up n hugged me tight n then there was no floor under my feet, he lifted me up n twirled me.

Then he stopped n I was standing on his feet n my ams encircling his neck, I came close to his ears

“I love u too my first crush” n kissed on his cheek

I though now I shoud reveal abt my crush na?? so I told.

We remained there hugging eachother

N I too shared my first kiss under the moonlight,

He teased of getting the tomato red color,

 

Then we lived happily evr after

 

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